err...no offense, but if your 1st line : 曾几何时,我以前很喜欢和他炫耀我的风光史can delete the phrase 以前 i think will be better? Its..just an opinion only, don't mind too much...lol
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err...no offense, but if your 1st line : 曾几何时,
我以前很喜欢和他炫耀我的风光史
can delete the phrase 以前 i think will be better?
Its..just an opinion only, don't mind too much...lol
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